Thread:Mgc26133/@comment-4347751-20140820183551/@comment-4295751-20140820212951

I didn't really develop the story enough to decide what his father could have done to become the bad guy. I'd also give the father some supernatural power (however would that be) so that he could have a chance against his son, and a motive for his evil deeds, whatever they are :) Everything in the story was too much in the air when I gave up on it.

Have you decided what the powers of other 2 members in your story will be? If you haven't, I've seen a wiki that's based on superpowers that might give you some ideas: http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/List_of_Kinetic_Abilities this page also has very cool different abilities you might use in your story(ies) -- since you said the main 4 are able to control the elements.. Some of the abilities listed on the page actually inspired a very cool villain for my next fanfic :) I've also heard of an animated series named W.I.T.C.H, five girls with different abilities (controling fire, weather, water, etc). Never watched though -- well, except a few episodes :) But I imagine there might be some stuff that could inspire different plots, if you're into those kind of stuff.