Thread:Tyler Gracyne/@comment-4295751-20150429222403/@comment-7764552-20150505202204

Mgc26133 wrote: whoa!! nice job! little fixing required tho. I noticed some errors in continuity, like the council meeting which mayor halted at the beginning but now seems to have approved, or Thomas' willingness to get as far away from Mystic Falls as possible despite he's supposed to have faith that April will clear their names.. :) Also some things are kinda left in the air, like how Stefan knows of this tribe, and why are they so willing to do the spell that Stefan asked, or why he doesn't even suspect that the whole thing was too easy, you know.. Maybe a little scene could be added for it, like:

Stefan: Can you do it? Jocasta: Of course, but first, tell us how you know of us." Stefan: *explains* Jocasta: Alright. We'll do what you request of us .. for the right price. Stefan: And the right price is? Jocasta: Does it matter where two of your loved ones are concerned? Stefan: (brief pause) No. Jocasta: Good. We'll get back to that later. Greg: The girl you wanted to bring back, did she have any family? .........

well .. unless of course you will already do this later in the episode :))

Yeah, Brad dies, but towards the end of season. His batchelor party goes wrong and he drinks too much alcohol, and where he crosses some lines, sheriff will be forced to shoot him, but he hits a bad spot and kills him accidentally (he comes back as a vampire in season 2 and will be the first antagonist of the season, but we won't know that yet).

I thought since we'll be heading to that, I figure we'd establish some sort of relationship between them. I mean, he's going to be his father in law, and we have no idea how they feel about one another. So I thought sheriff would be aware that Brad tipped Anita off about her being a suspect and let her go.. But I'm conflicted about how he will be feeling about it.. Mad, or appreciative. If he's mad about it, he'd be putting Brad to a prison, portaring a class A jackass father; or if he's appreciative, he could imply (rather than saying it outright) that he knows what Brad did and that he appreciates him for it, for looking out for his daughter, and they smile to each other.. That's where I'm conflicted. What kind of a father should Randy (sheriff) be? U make a good case, in all the senarios. I miss-read the council thing.

About Brad and Randy, i think it should b held in a good fashion so that when Brad turns antagonistic, it seems "antagonistic". But then again, there's also the motive in every antagonist, like, the justification.